I have been struggling with what doesnt kill you, so my teacher transposed the song down a semi tone and down one tone. I recored both so I could decide which track to use. This week however I have got a sore throat, so the recordings don't sound as good as they normal do, I go off at some points.
This is my recording of the down one tone track:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OCZJ97q98Ow
At the beginning it is hard for me to sing, which means if i choose this track I would need to change the melody so I was able to sing it.

This is my recording of the down a semi tone track:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hfDr9mF3DSc
For both tracks, I need to wrok on my breath control as I run out of breath in the middle of a phrase.